Friday, 17 April 2015

Critical Reflection

English lessons had never been what I always look forward to during my secondary school and college days. When I was told that I had to take on this course, I had visions of having to do numerous essays within stipulated time and the pressure left me worried.

My first academic writing I did during this course had many errors in them, with mainly subject verb agreements and sentence structuring. Even if I tried my best, I still could not get my ideas across appropriately. I had always been weak in expressing myself through words and am not able to put my ideas across coherently.

Thinking back, the past few months taking this ES1102 course has been rather beneficial for me. There had only been three main essays to done and was given ample time to complete them. Classes weren’t as boring as I thought it would be. The active participation during lessons from my peers made it even more enriching.

One particular thing in this course that is different from any usual English curriculum is having a peer review system. I was initially a person that feared criticisms. I was afraid of being judged based on my command in English. However, with the many peer evaluations I had on my writings, it had allowed me to be more receptive to criticisms. Also, reading others essay allowed me to broaden my knowledge and be introduced to different styles of writing. Giving peer evaluation made me ask questions like, “Does this sentence make sense? Do I know what the writer is trying to say? Has the writer evaluated and explained the specific idea?” Critically analysing others essay has made me constantly ask such questions while writing my own essay, allowing me to articulate my points more coherently and logically.

With this peer review system, I realized that I am a person that knows exactly how essays should be structured and am able to give positive comments to others. However, I was not able to apply it back to myself. Maybe it was due to a lack in knowledge of the particular topic that made me stuck at every paragraph whenever I write my own essay.


Now with the course coming to an end, it made me realize that ES1102 was not a burden module that I was “forced” to take after all. In fact, I should be glad that I was exposed to this course as I am certain the things learned would help me in my future writing of reports and of course the compulsory module ES1541 I would be taking next semester.  I have learned my strengths and weaknesses when it comes to academic writing. I had a hard time coping with my weaknesses but Laetitia and my peers had helped me a lot along this English Learning Journey. This course has been my most enjoyable module this semester.

Thursday, 16 April 2015

Problem Solution Essay FINAL DRAFT

Social media have become a great source of entertainment and communication today. With its easy communication and instantaneous posting online, many individuals have already regarded it as a crucial role in their daily lives. However, along with the many benefits, social media has brought negative impacts. The revolution of social media has caused people to lose touch with the conventional ways of communication. It has also created a virtual platform for people to fight verbally without being identified easily. Bullying is no longer isolated to classrooms or playgrounds but rather has spread to harassments through mobile phones and social media sites. This is known as cyber-bullying. This essay will describe cyber-bullying in the United States of America (USA) and address the existing and potential solutions.

Cyber-bullying is a form of verbal harassment, which occurs through social networking sites or by any form of online communication means (No Bullying, America, 2014). Unlike traditional bullies, cyber-bullies use the Internet to defend and protect their identity giving them the power to defame and harass others on social sites. Such cases have been rather prevalent in the United States with an alarming result of 52 percent of students reported being bullied online (Ibid). Sunburn (2014) states in his article that suicide is the third main cause of death among youths and teenagers with many cases being associated to cyber-bullying. One such case that took place in Lakeland, Florida that has gathered national or even global attention, is the Rebecca Sedwick’s suicide case. According to Wallace (2014), Sedwick was a victim of bullying, be it online or offline. She had received messages from two Florida teens inciting her to “drink bleach and die”.  On top of that, according to the sheriff’s department, they also physically attacked Sedwick.  Just a month after Sedwick’s death, the two teens were reportedly charged with aggravated stalking and accused of being the main culprits that led to the death of Sedwick (Ibid). This shows that, sadly, cyber-bullying has been a real problem that can cause substantial damage to victims of it.

Many states in the United States have implemented federal and state legislation that criminalizes any forms of harassments, be it in or out of the cyber space to diminish the frequency and severity of cyber-bullying (Wired Safety, 2011). Theoretically, victims would not need to be afraid since they are now protected and covered by the law. Although some states have successfully passed laws that protect children from bullying and harassment, the resulting legal actions taken against the bullies have failed to apprehend the cyber-bullies let alone address the issue of cyber-bullying. In the Sedwick’s case, the two teens that were charged, were released just a month after their arrest, due to a lack of concrete evidence to convict them (Wallace, 2014). This clearly shows that the laws did not truly help in alleviating the problem. The government should have imposed laws that specifically address cyber-bullying. With specific laws towards cyber-bullying, it would force cyber-bullies to be more cautious of their words online and possibly remove past cyber-bullying content. The main challenge however is the detection of cyber-bullying where high percentages of cases are left unnoticed. According to No Bullying (2013), a survey conducted by Trolled Nation in 2013, an estimated number of 37 percent of cyber-bullying cases are left unreported. The fact that many such acts are still occurring online and left undetected shows that laws lack proper reach and proper effectiveness to solve the problem. Since most cases involve mainly teenagers, the first step to detection and deterrence of cyber-bullying should start with school compounds.

In order to address the problem more efficiently, there are a few things schools should do. Firstly, schools should enforce clear guidelines and policies to ban the misuse of technology within school compounds. Schools could install blocking technology on all school computers restricting the usage for educational purposes only (Langhorst, 2012). Not only would such restriction destroy platforms where cyber-bullies commit their acts during school hours, but would also promote the use of computers in an educational manner. Secondly, schools can engage anti cyber-bullying speakers who can then educate staff and students by disseminating informational materials to explain cyber-bullying, how to use the internet safely and provide information as to where they would be able to find help should anyone of them become victims. Finally, schools can also establish schemes or methods for reporting of cyber-bullying cases, whether they are a victim or suspect of someone being victimized, with relevant counseling and responses to help (Ibid). With these steps taken in school compounds around United States, the detection of cyber-bullying cases would greatly increase and counselors could then stretch out their helping hands to the victims.

Cyber-bullying is a socially unacceptable behavior. There can never be a comprehensive “remedy” to cyber-bullying. However, with continuous effort and commitment, not only cyber-bullying, but also all forms of bullying can be successfully identified and addressed, minimizing number of victims that falls into the hands of bullies. With the combined effort from legislators, schools, teachers, parents and children to work towards creating a cyber-bully free society, the vision of having a cyberspace free from bullies may no longer be a distant reality.


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Reference:

Langhorst, P. (2012, October 1). Cyberbullying: How Technology Can Be Used to Battle Its Effects. Retrieved from http://www.cyberbullyhotline.com/10-01-12-edtech-digest.html

No Bullying. (2013, April 28). Bullying Statistics, The Ultimate Guide! |NoBullying|. Retrieved from http://nobullying.com/bullying-statistics/

No Bullying, America. (2013, April 21). Cyber Bullying in America. Retrieved from http://nobullying.com/cyber-bullying-in-america/

Sanburn, J. (2013, October 16). A Florida Tragedy Illustrates Rising Concern About Cyber-Bullying Suicides | TIME.com. Retrieved from http://nation.time.com/2013/10/16/a-florida-tragedy-illustrates-rising-concern-about-cyber-bullying-suicides/

Wallace, K. (2014, April 21). Rebecca Sedwick suicide: Police file raises questions about bullying - CNN.com. Retrieved from http://edition.cnn.com/2014/04/18/living/rebecca-sedwick-bullying-suicide-follow-parents/

WiredSafety. (2011). Cyberbullying/Harassment/Stalking Federal and State Legislation. Retrieved from https://www.wiredsafety.org/toolkitmedia/files/file/Articles/Cyberbullying-Harassment-Stalking_State_Legislation.pdf


Tuesday, 7 April 2015

Problem Solution Essay Draft 3: discuss a problem arising from the use of social media and its impact on individuals and/or society in a particular country. Identify existing solutions and propose possible new measures that could be implemented to address that problem.

Social network has been a popular tool for the past twenty years or so, connecting people. With its easy communication and instantaneous posting online, people are losing touch with the conventional ways of communication. However, along with the many benefits, social media has brought some negative impacts. While the Internet has become a great source of entertainment and research materials, it has also created a virtual platform for people to fight verbally without being identified easily. Bullying is no longer isolated to classrooms or playgrounds but rather has widespread to harassments through mobile phones and social media sites. This is known as cyber-bullying. The essay will describe on cyber-bullying in United States of America (USA) and address the existing and potential solutions.

Cyber-bullying is a form of verbal harassment, which occurs through social networking sites or by any form of online communication mean (No Bullying, America, 2014). Unlike traditional bullies, cyber-bullies use the Internet to defend and protect their identity giving them the power to defame and harass others on social sites. Such cases have been rather prevalent in the United States with an alarming result of 52 percent of students reported being bullied online (Ibid). Sunburn (2014) states in his article that suicide is the third main cause of death among youths and teenagers with many cases being associated to cyber-bullying. One such case that took place in Lakeland, Florida that has gathered national or even global attention, is the Rebecca Sedwick’s case. According to Wallace (2014), Sedwick was a victim of bullying, be it online or offline. She had received messages from two Florida teens inciting her to “drink bleach and die”.  On top of that, according to the sheriff’s department, they also physically attacked Sedwick.  Just a month after Sedwick’s death, the two teens were reportedly being charged with aggravated stalking and accused of being the main culprits that led to the death of Sedwick (Ibid). Sadly, but it is a fact that cyber-bullying has been a real problem that can cause substantial damage to victims of it.

Many states in the United States have implemented federal and state legislation that criminalizes any forms of harassments, be it in or out of the cyber space to diminish the frequency and severity of cyber-bullying (Wired Safety, 2011). Theoretically, victims would not need to be afraid since they are now protected and covered by the law. Although some states have successfully pass laws that protect children from bullying and harassment, but the resulting legal actions taken against the bullies failed to apprehend the cyber-bullies let alone address the issue of cyber-bullying. Referring back to Sedwick’s case as mentioned earlier, the two teens that were being charged, was released just a month after their arrest, due to a lack in concrete evidence to convict them (Wallace, 2014). This clearly shows that the laws imposed did not truly help in alleviating the problem. The government should have imposed laws that specifically address cyber-bullying. With specific laws towards cyber-bullying, it would force cyber-bullies to be more cautious of their words online and possibly remove past cyber-bullying content. The main challenge however is the detection of cyber-bullying where high percentages of cases are left unnoticed. According to No Bullying (2013), a survey conducted by Trolled Nation in 2013, an estimated number of 37 percent of cyber-bullying cases are left unreported. The fact that many of such acts are still occurring online, left undetected, shows that laws lack proper reach and proper effectiveness to solve the problem. Since most cases occur mainly in teenagers, the first step to detection and deterrence of cyber-bullying should start with school compounds.

In order to address the problem more efficiently, there are a few things schools can do. Firstly, schools should enforce clear guidelines and policies to ban the use of technology within school compounds to bully others. Schools could install blocking technology on all school computers restricting the usage for educational purposes only (Langhorst, 2012). Not only would such restriction destroy the playgrounds where cyber-bullies commit their acts during school hours, but would also promote the use of computers in an educational manner. Secondly, schools can engage anti cyber-bullying speakers who can then educate staff and students by disseminating informational materials to explain cyber-bullying, how to use the internet safely and providing information as to where they would be able to find help should anyone of them become victims. Finally, schools can also establish schemes or methods for reporting of cyber-bullying cases, whether you are a victim or suspect of someone being victimized, with relevant counseling and responses to help (Ibid). With these steps taken in school compounds around United States, the detection of cyber-bullying cases would greatly increase and counselors could then stretch out their helping hands to the victims.

Cyber-bullying is a socially unacceptable behavior. There can never be a comprehensive “remedy” to cyber-bullying. However, with continuous effort and commitment, not only cyber-bullying, but also all forms of bullying can be successfully identified and addressed, minimizing number of victims that falls into the hands of bullies. With the combined effort from legislators, schools, teachers, parents and children to work towards creating a cyber-bully free society, the vision of having a cyberspace free from bullies may no longer be a distant reality.


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Reference:

Langhorst, P. (2012, October 1). Cyberbullying: How Technology Can Be Used to Battle Its Effects. Retrieved from http://www.cyberbullyhotline.com/10-01-12-edtech-digest.html

No Bullying. (2013, April 28). Bullying Statistics, The Ultimate Guide! |NoBullying|. Retrieved from http://nobullying.com/bullying-statistics/

No Bullying, America. (2013, April 21). Cyber Bullying in America. Retrieved from http://nobullying.com/cyber-bullying-in-america/

Sanburn, J. (2013, October 16). A Florida Tragedy Illustrates Rising Concern About Cyber-Bullying Suicides | TIME.com. Retrieved from http://nation.time.com/2013/10/16/a-florida-tragedy-illustrates-rising-concern-about-cyber-bullying-suicides/

Wallace, K. (2014, April 21). Rebecca Sedwick suicide: Police file raises questions about bullying - CNN.com. Retrieved from http://edition.cnn.com/2014/04/18/living/rebecca-sedwick-bullying-suicide-follow-parents/


WiredSafety. (2011). Cyberbullying/Harassment/Stalking Federal and State Legislation. Retrieved from https://www.wiredsafety.org/toolkitmedia/files/file/Articles/Cyberbullying-Harassment-Stalking_State_Legislation.pdf

Problem Solution Essay draft 2: discuss a problem arising from the use of social media and its impact on individuals and/or society in a particular country. Identify existing solutions and propose possible new measures that could be implemented to address that problem.

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One such case that took place in Lakeland, Florida has gathered national or even global attention, the Rebecca Sedwick’s case[elclm16] . Sedick was a victim of bullying, both online or offline and suffered from major depression. She eventually gave up on life and ended her life[elclm17] . According to Wallace (2014), before Sedwick’s death in September 2013, she already had reports [elclm18] of being bullied. Even after her death, the bullies continued their nasty languages and ridiculed her online. A month later, two teens were reportedly charged with intensive stalking and accused of being the main culprits that led to the death of Sedwick. However, just a month after the arrests, charges of them [elclm19] were dropped since no concrete evidence were found of them stalking (Ibid). The people that ridiculed and caused much distressed in Sedwick are still roaming down the streets thinking that what they did means nothing while in actual fact, their actions had brought [elclm20] much pain to her and people who loved her. These wrongdoers ought to be brought to justice and taught of[elclm21]  the consequences of their actions. It has since then brought about[elclm22]  a public concern as to whether authorities are able to control the problem of cyber-bullying since perpetrators are so easily let off.  [elclm23] 





Two young central Florida teens are facing felony aggravated stalking charges for bullying a 12-year-old classmate, Rebecca Sedwick, who committed suicide. Polk County Sheriff Grady Judd said the bullying crossed the line from teen meanness into criminal harassment.
Sedwick received text messages and online messages from the two teens telling her to kill herself and that she should “drink bleach and die.” Sedwick was also physically attacked by the two girls, according to the sheriff’s department.

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838 words

Reference: (alphabetical order of surname of author)

No Bullying, America. (2014, November 05). Cyber Bullying in America.

Josh Sanburn. (2013, October 16). A Florida tragedy illustrates rising concern about cyber-bullying suicides.

Kelly Wallace. (2014, April 21). Police file raises questions about bullying in Rebecca Sedwick’s Suicide.


WiredSafety. (2011). Cyberbullying/Harassment/Stalking Federal and State Legislation.


Langhorst, P. (2012, October 1). Cyberbullying: How Technology Can Be Used to Battle Its Effects. Retrieved from http://www.cyberbullyhotline.com/10-01-12-edtech-digest.html