Tuesday, 7 April 2015

Problem Solution Essay Draft 1: discuss a problem arising from the use of social media and its impact on individuals and/or society in a particular country. Identify existing solutions and propose possible new measures that could be implemented to address that problem.

Social network has been a popular tool for the past twenty years or so that connects people who are living miles away from each other back together. With its easy communication and instantaneous posting online, why wouldn’t anyone want to be involved with it? However, people fail to understand the perils that social media brings about. With every advantage comes a corresponding disadvantage. While the Internet has become a great source of entertainment and research materials, it has also created a virtual platform for people to fight verbally without being identified. Bullying is no longer isolated to classrooms or playgrounds but rather has widespread to harassments through mobile phones and social media sites. This is known as cyber-bullying.

Cyber-bullying is a form of verbal harassment in which occurs through social networking sites or by any form of communication means. People conceal their identity by creating and using fake profiles leaving themselves anonymous to defame others by posting rumors on to social sites such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram.  Such cases have been rather prevalent in the America. An alarming result of 52 percent of students reported being bullied online, which is more than half of the cohort surveyed (No Bullying, America, 2014). For the past decade, numerous cyber-bullying cases ended with victims ending their life. According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC), suicide is the third main cause of death among youths and teenagers with around 4,400 deaths each year worldwide. Also, with every death comes at least 100 suicide attempts (Ibid).

One of the top stories that have gotten national and maybe even global attention would be the Amanda Todd Case (1996-2012). Todd met an anonymous person through Facebook who frequently complimented her to the extent of convincing her to show her bare body to him. A year later after the incident, she received a picture of her topless body through an anonymous mail which then went viral. Many people teased and bullied her where she had to be forced to switch schools numerous times. Todd suffered from anxiety, major depression and panic disorder. After several months later, she eventually gave up and ended her life. However, the hatred for her did not cease with her passing. Her story continued circulating online. People continued to mock at her suicide and treat her story as if it was a joke and was not sympathetic at her plight at all (No Bullying, 2014). The people that ridiculed and caused much distressed in Todd are still roaming down the streets thinking that what they did means nothing while in actual fact, their actions had brought much pain to her and people who loved her. These perpetrators ought to be brought to justice and taught of the consequences of their actions.

To curb such problems, schools have welcomed cyber-bullying assembly speakers to educate students on the current situation of cyber-bullying. Also, the American Humane Association (AHA), committed to extend help to victims and to the bullies as well. AHA has spread the word on how to identify victims of cyber-bullying and also how each and every individual would be able to help them. Bullies themselves also need help. Children turn into bullies because they were victims of cyber-bullying themselves and have suffered from trauma in the past. Providing them with psychological help can prevent them from intimidating others and at the same time mend their distress previously suffered. Parents also play important roles in helping to ease cyber-bullying cases. Among the parents of teenagers, aged 13-17 that has a social networking account, one in six of them know that their child is being bullied in the cyberspace. But it does not seem to be helping out in any way to lessen the cases of cyber-bullying. Moreover, 39% of parents of teens connect to their child through social networking sites, but connecting with them does not mean ending cyber-bullying acts online. It in fact creates more problems and relationship issues between them (No Bullying, 2014).


Singapore is the next in line, behind the United States for cyber-bullying. Victims of cyber-bullying have little or nothing to end the mistreatments. Despite the emotional trauma suffered, they still did not want to reach out to the authorities since there was no law to protect them. To alleviate such problems, Singapore introduced a new law, on 3rd March 2014, against those that participates in harassment (Ministry of Law, 2014). The intention of such a law is to legalize any forms of harassments, be it in or out of the cyber space. Activities like stalking, bullying, sexual harassment and harassment of children, are considered to be acts of harassments in Singapore. The law covers for people within the workforce and also Singaporeans suffering from bullying out of the country. With the newly implemented law, perpetrators would have to take full accountability for what they do and say and have a taste of the damage done to the victims. Cyber-bullying can now lead to obligatory counseling and the possibility of being locked behind bars. Victims are now protected and covered by the law. This forces committers to think twice before posting anything sensitive online, as the outcome may be detrimental towards their future. Since such a law implemented can force perpetrators to stop their acts, America should consider imposing such a law in a few states to see if such an implementation can yield results, before introducing it to every state in America to help lessen the problem of cyber-bullying.


Cyber-bullying is a socially disagreeable behavior. It brings about negative impacts on both the bully and the victim. Cyber-bullying can possibly lead to low self-esteem or even suicidal thoughts in victims. Moreover, the Internet is a dangerous place where information can be spread worldwide with just a click away. Cyber-bullying is a vicious cycle.


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No Bullying, America. (2014, November 05). Cyber Bullying in America.

No Bullying. (2014, November 30). The truth behind 6 disturbing cyberbullying cases that turned into suicide stories.

American Humane Association.


Ministry of Law, Press releases. (2014, February 26). A new Protection from Harassment Bill to be introduced to strengthen the laws against harassment.

1 comment:

  1. This draft 1 was just an outline which had many errors in them. Without peer evaluation, i don't think i would be able to correct my mistakes in draft 2.

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